play, fun, fish, mammels
Emily I love your poem, it really describes a dolphin. I think you did a good job. Just one thing though joyful and happy have the same meaning, so maybe try something like joyful, and another word that describes a dolphin, but everything else was perfect! Good job.
THANKS ASHLEY!!! THAT WAS VERY GOOD ADVICE!!!!!!
Filling in my soul
No life now coming from these eyes
Max, when I read your poem I got a sad and scared feeling inside me. You wrote it very well. Just one question: What do you mean by no life now coming from these eyes?
Max I liked your poem, but it was kind out scary. Why did you wrote your poem on that topic? In other words I think you are really good at writing poems as well as everybody else.
Did you fallow the format? But I still liked your poem.
Max I really like your poem and your really good at poems. Do you write poems about your life or do you just come up with the topic by yourself?
I loved this poem. It was very, very well done! I only caught one thing. The end word needs to be something different than the first. But still, this is a great poem. At this point, if you write poems like these, I will see you on billboards in Hollywood, not kidding!!!
nice max it felt really scary and dark i liked it.
max, I love your poem but im kind of worried about you. It is kind of scary.
A Change in the Season
Flowers start blooming.
Roses, Tulips, Violets.
Spring is on its way.
There once was a young girl in a glass ball
It was so crouded because she was tall
She wanted to get out
So she tried to shout
That only made the rain fall
I really liked your poem it matched the type and it was really good it had depth to! :)
Thanks, Max! :}
Your poem is really good and there is nothing i would chang if I were you.
I really like your poem it has very nice riming and i really like it!!
I like it because it is deep. i also like how it not a object
(Just for Today)
Just for today I will march to the beat of my own drum. No matter what people think.
Just for today I will let all the happiness wrap around me with its warm, inviting arms.
Just for today I will cry real tears of both pain and joy.
Just for today I will be who I want to be, so everyone can see the diamonds that lie within me.
Just for today I will have sympathy for those who are diamonds that need a bit of polishing.
Just for today I will trespass into your world and tell you all what I think is right. Maybe you'll listen.
Just for today we'll never close our eyes. Don't let the day slip away until you've said what you've wanted to say.
Just for today let your fears slip your mind and escape reality. Walk your walk, shout your shout, live your life the way it was meant to be lived. Just don't give up on yourself.
Jessica that is really good but it sounds familiar the poem was really good you are good at righting poems.
Above the ground.
Through the grass.
In the house.
Under the table.
Down the stairs.
Over the dark magical demons.
Through the wall.
Beyound the gold and sliver.
There it sits in the deep dark duengin.
Blue water sparkles
The sun shining bright and warm
Sand is everywhere
Ashley, I really like your ppoem. I like how you described a beach so well. If I read this poem and didn't see the title that's what I 'd think of.
Ashley, your poem is great! It has a lot of describing words and it feels relaxing. The words definately make you think of an ocean beach. Nice job!
i like your poem because you disribed the beach really good. i alos like how how ith flows
Soft, puffy, furry, cute
Loving, cuddling, caring
I love how you described the doggie I can just picture the dog playing outside.
oval, laced up
spiral, bounce, roll, drop, fly
Use your wheels, then avoid defense.
I can't believe I speel my own name wrong! Sorry!
This was an interesting poem and I really liked it. It really describes football well.
To Do List (Just For Today)
Just for today I will not have a fake smile but a true smile all day.
Just for today I will be the girl in the mirror not the girl I pretend to be.
Just for today I will fallow my dreams and atleast make some come true.
Just for today I will stand up for what I believe is far.
Just for today I will not hide my feelings but I will express my feelings.
Just for today I will show everyone what I'm made of.
Just for today I may just write a few poems and express my feelings through poetry.
Just for today I will turn my chin the other way from the bullies.
Just For Today
Just for today i wont let my anger beat me.
Just for today i will listion to my mom.
Just for today i shall clean my room.
Just for today i will do my homework.
Just for today i will use a fork.
Just for today i will be nice.
Just for today i will respect others.
Just for today i wont throw stuff.
Just for Today
Just for today I will stand up for my friends when others are mean
Just for today in will stop being selfish and give to one another
Just for today I will eat couliflower even though I hate that food
Just for today I will work at the senior home
Just for today I will fly to the moon in a pink rocketship
Just for today I will become a teacher and be helpful and not teach for money but have fun with it and help them succseed in life
Just for today I will be a movie star that gets to walk on the red carpet and get pictures of myself in magazines
Anxious is the color of Neon Yellow.
It sounds like a bunch of hyper kids bouncing off walls.
It taste like Ripe Oranges.
And smells like a sweet summer day.
Anxiuos like a handful of kids screaming in the walls.
It feels like a bunch of butterflies in your stomach
Just for Today I will
Just for today I will be the girl who I am suppose to be
Just for today I will stop being afraid to make mistakes
Just for today I will look at the good and forget the bad
Just for today I will listen to what my heart says is right
Just for today I will give my very best to the ones that teach us
Just for today I will understand why life isnt perfect
Just for today I will let go of the past and continue towards the future
Just for today I will know that life is always perfect and sometimes the worst mistakes are the best descions in your life
That was a great poem Dana. It seemed very emotional. Keep on doing the same.
Home runs, Strikeouts
Running, Sliding, Swinging
Swing and hit it over the fence
4 Senses Poem
Rage is the color of dark red.
It sounds like a war zone.
It tastes like a red hot pepper.
And it smells like hot humid air.
Rage looks like a bull charging at red.
It makes me feel mad.
( Just for Today)
Just for today I'll hold in my anger simply becuase I have a short temper.
Just for today i put my self first becuase I care too much about others.
Just for today i'll be independent not the little girl i once was
Just for today i'll follow my dream if I fail i'll wish on a star.
Just for today i'll be that little girl I once was.
Just for today i'll run a maraton becuase I want to
Just for today i'll be nice but really alot of people really annoy me.
just for today i'll day dream becuase I have alot of dreams that will come true
cat in the hat
there once was a cat
she was wearign a hat
her name was blue
she got the flu
that cat lost her hat
White and fluffy
chase her all around
throw her toy until she's exhausted.
Write something about yourself. No need to be fancy, just an overview.