The Purple Flower
I once saw this purple flower.
Apparently it had much power.
This purple flower made me sneeze.
This devil flower made me wheeze.
Every time I see it I cry.
I really hope that I don't die.
I was happy when it was dead.
Now I can safely go to bed.
That was a really good poem
Thank you!! :)
Your poem was good i liked it alot!
very good poem jessica. I love how you are scared of a flower.
Jessica, I really think that the poem has meaning and you made it make sence and didn't just say random words to get it done so it's really good.
I really like the idea of your poem and its not just alot of random.I think it is really good.
WOW! THAT IS A VERY GREAT POEM THAT YOU WROTE I LOVE IT YOU WRIGHT VERY GREAT POEMS!!!!!
Thanks Haleigh :)
Thanks Molly :D
I saw a green tree
The pink dasie blossomed big
I think it is spring
Haleigh I think your poem was really good and it followed all the requirments for a Huiku. But I have one question is the pink dasie growing on the tree or around it?
Haleigh I love your poem becuase you have details explaining what season is coming and how you know when spring is coming when you see the blossoms.
cool poem haleigh i like it, it is very well writen and it has a very great expression.
Haleigh, I think that your poem was outstanding. You always surprise people with something new.
There once was a bird
who spoke a beutiful word
that could be lovely
There once was a bird
who spoke a beutiful word
that can be lovely
a place to get away (perposition)
pass the willow tree
down the creek
beyond the abandon playground
beyond all the yelling
beyond all the hitting
in the woods
up the secert creek
a place to get away
I like how deep it is and your word choose. It remind me of how there is alwas a place that you can be you.
Bashful is the color of light pink
It tastes like bland water
And smells like your own unnoticable house smell
Bashful looks like a tiny little bug
It makes you feel invisible
Michael your poem was great. I like how you put lots of details in it. My favorite part was the color.
Let the tears flow (couplet)
many times tears are shed.
does it really make us dead.
life that tears can create.
tears you should not hate.
so let the tears just rain.
get released from your pain.
in stone roses can grow.
just feed them let the the tears flow.
shelter the roses in love and care.
even out of stone roses can grow there.
Is this the poem that you wouldn't let me read at first? It's really good and heartfelt. You put a lot of depth into your words. I really liked it! :)
Yes it is and thank you jessica yours was really good!
Nice work Max i liked how depth it was.
I really liked the poem, Max. Good Job! I really felt a connection from me to the poem. It just makes me want to let out all the pain in me. LOL!!
Max I really like your poem, because you made it really deap I can also realate to your poem Great Job.
Fox in a Box
Once I found a fox
Living in a box
It had a plain door
It had a plain floor
It had a weak roof
And then it went poof
I picked up the box
And said goodbye fox
This is my couplet poem.
swimming, sliding, floating
slides, pools, arcades, hotel
spraying, riding, splashing
Just for today I'll be me instead of the girl I pretend to be
Just for today I'll follow my dreams and if I fail I'll make others suceed
Just for today I won't hate I'll care for others just you wait
Just for today I'll lie in bed and think of ways to do the unsaid
Just for today I'll write a few poems, express my feeling, and it's about my home
Just for today I'll pick some flowers and hand them out to people traped in towers
Just for today I'll disappear to fool someone then reappear
Just for today I'll wonder what I'm just going to do tomorrow
My poem is called.... What am I Just Going to do Tomorrow.
Lexi I love your poem and I am not just saying that to be nice Im saying that as a fact that I LOVE YOUR POEM. I love that your poem says that u will be your self and i love everything about it so nice job.
Thanks, Dana!! :}
The Way Life Should Be
I like to be me
Life isnt perfect at all
That is fine with me
Your poem is really good it had rythm and it fitted that format.
Baseball is so fun
You hit lots of home runs
with giant cool bats
Nick great job I really like how you tell your fav. sport you also make baseball seen reaally fun.
Paradise (Preposition Poem)
Through the buetiful clouds
Into the light his spirit goes
Side by side i know were together
Through paradise he now rest in heven
Over the clouds he watches me
In my heart I know he's hear with me
Under my dreams I will always thingk or dream of him
Above the clouds my drear grandpa lies.
Females and males
They make us very smart
I love some of my teachers very much
It's wonderful you appreciate teachers. We do work very hard to have the most creative and engaging lessons for you.
Surprise is the color of light purple.
It sounds like somebody's high pitched voice.
It tastes like a trip to heaven.
And smells like the biggest greatest gift in the world.
A surprise looks like when you won a million dollars.
It makes you feel like someone just saved your life.
Your poem has vary good word choice. And if you were to chang somthing there would nothing to change becouse it is all good!
I love flowers
They are my favorite
They are very pretty
I love your poem. Watch your syallbles, though. The first and last lines should have five syllables. The middle line should have seven. Your first line has only four syllables. Your middle line has only six syllables. The last line in your poem has six syllables. Otherwise, great job.
Joyfule is the coler of baby blue.
It sounds like a joyfule scream.
It tast like chocolet cake.
It smells like a chocolet factery.
Joyfule looks like a happy kid on there B-day.
Joyfule makes you feel good inside.
Maisy and Marty go to my Party
One day I had a birthday party.
I envited my best friend Marty.
My friend Maisy brought her frog Crazy.
Who went crazy over a daisy.
It was time to open gifts
One was a hellicopter that lifts.
Maisy brought me my favorite movie.
It was called the girl named Julie.
I have a stinky locker.
It went to see a doctor.
A bit later he is done.sad thing is he could not run.
But than his stink came back worse.
And that he thought he had a curse.
He came back to his space.
And forever remained in place.
Write something about yourself. No need to be fancy, just an overview.