Watch the green grass grow
The plant slowly moves upward
Dies from winter day
Brings joy to my mouth
Relieves me from
Overwhelms me with chocolate
Wonderful taste looking forward to
Nothing tastes better then frosted brownies
I love my moms there the best
Ever lasting sweetness
Smelling the aroma is like heaven
Nice poem but What do Brownies relieve you from?
ok but what does it relieve you from and what is an aroma?
My head starts to go blank, so dark.
My surroundings start to go quiet and park.
The world was gone, and it was glum,
but the light came like a bullet shot from a gun.
The land was strangely different, but in a way
it was familiar, and I wanted to stay.
I didn't know how long I was their,
but my eyes blinked hard, and I woke up in my chair.
Does this mean anything to you?
well, I notice that in some dreams, everything seems so physical, and I'm familiar with everything in a way.
What is the point of this poem?
to describe dreams
I like the story and rhymes.
I like the descriptive words. I feel like I am in the poem.
My blood is rushing,
The deer stops and stars at me,
Bang the deer falls down.
Lightning in the sky
Whistle crackle boom pow bam
Up so very high
I like how you used onomatopoeias!!
By the way this poem is a Diamante poem
nice job, struggling and falling in the snow!
The way that poem made me feel the coldness running down my skin of thinking of winter made me miss all the fun things you could do with your friends and family.
Once there was a boulder
He lived on ashoulder
He had no fun
Because he was a pun
He lived with brent
He was sent
He had a lot of food
He had pood
like the rhyme its good
What do you mean by "he was a pun"? Did you just run out of rhymes?
Once I had a fish.
I ate it in my dish.
It was so good
I feel like i need more I should
Only if I had one wish
I like your sense of creativity
Over the ground
Above the rocks
Beneath the sun
In the sky
Across the giant blue
Outside my house
Among me, you are the cloud
I love this poem you have a lot of strong words and I bet it means a lot for someone who might have passed away.
Into the outdoors is where I will go
Up into the treestand early in the morning
Through the scope I stare at the deer
Around the brush I track the deer blood
Out of the butcher on my way home
On the dinner table the venison sits
Through our stomachs it goes
Jason, your poem is cool! It makes me think of all the bad storms that we have had. Are you afraid of storms?
Swimming is something that is hard to beat.
You almost always end in defeat.
When you start swimming, you can’t stop.
But when you swim, you can’t hop.
I like to swim in the light.
But you have to keep it not so bright.
Whenever I wait to swim, I can’t wait.
I really hope I swim super great!
I have the orange bobber in sight
Then I feel a strong bite
After the fish made the pole jerk
I knew this fish was going to make me work
As I was pulling it up to shore
In my head this was a huge score
I had realized i had caught an enormous bass
It’s now mounted on the wall behind the glass
friendship is the color pink
it sounds like people laughing happily
pink tastes like sweet strawberries freshly picked
pink smells like the beginning of summer
it looks like the leaves falling in the fall
Shades of Time
The clock ticks and tocks tonight.
Then there was a light, so very bright.
Turn the clock back day by day.
Before the first horse could even neigh.
Go back, to when monsters ruled the Earth.
Then go and see, our world's birth.
Now go to the future, with flying cars.
Watch the revolution take place, on Mars.
Just for today I will not be negative
Just for today I am me
Just for today I will put a smile on my face
Just for today I won't be arrogant
Just for today I will stand out
Just for today I'll be a best friend
Just for today I am going to talk to everyone
Just for today I'll make someone's day
Rain coming down hard
Waiting for the thunder roll
Wanting it to stop
Write something about yourself. No need to be fancy, just an overview.